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Old 07-03-04, 02:51 PM   #11
QBsmasher
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This battle was pretty tight I liked it.

Prikitikal had the better flow, his structure was off but his punchlines were hittin. I didnt see any multis, the metas were straight though. Try more personals next time also. You closed the battle well also, although your opener wasnt that strong.

2-up your flow and structure was nice. These battles are about the punchlines, and I wasnt really feelin yours that much. Good personal about changing his name to practice. More punchlines next time though.

v/Praktikal
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