my vote has to go to mike,.... good verse here....
ike.. please dont use them.. " ' "' ' thats just herby
um mike.... you came prety hard with your punches.... could have improved on your wordplay and structure but overall the verse was pretty nice
ike.... as i said... dont use " ' and shit to show were the punch is... thats basically saying that you think the reader is to dumb to understand you punch....
it was a bit basic... a few of your rhymes were forced.. overall i just liked mikes verse more...

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