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Old 08-12-05, 02:45 PM   #13
Indeph
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hmm...


Tephlon:
I like that you used some personals. But it didn't really have anything that special in it. Like the Bionic elbow line said you'd use it against him. It didn't really require much thought for that. Then the following line was predicting what he was gonna say and then dissing him for something you THINK he was gonna say. The closer was pretty good though.

9th Degree: Aight I like your wordplay in this. The opener was ok nothing really big. The bang for your buck shit I liked. I hate link punches so I didn't like the following line.The step to this line seems somewhat played. The fisherman line was ill. And the closer was an ill personal too.

So overall I say 9th wins.

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