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Old 10-01-05, 12:17 AM   #5
~Lady Fiya~
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Dude got vocals on the chorus..... I just don't like his voice over the beat, it has to grow on you. Your first verse was decent lyrically, the flow was straight as well. Second verse, you got a better flow IMO. Your presence is good, delivery is just right for the beat, relaxed not forced.

I hope you don't think this hate cuz I ain't on that. I thought this was a pretty decent track. You can delete this if you think this beef.

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