whmmmm

emotion: both did pretty good here,but im going to give ysdat the edge in this area do to i felt some areas in his more the spects

imagery: was a tie, both did pretty good expressing they're selve and getting to poitn across.

format/structure: pretty good, but id say spektikul had the more better structure...

overall: what seperated you was who can tell a better story,which both came good
but spekts peace was alittle more predictable which was ok but less interesting to the reader,ysdat was very nice about life's story being told backwards and it was sad with alotta emotion also....my vote is Ysdat

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