This is just getting too easy for you.....atleast you posted your verse

I'll critique it just for shits and giggles...

Voice sounds like you are trying to make it lower than it really is, but not bad. Punches were nice......LMAO @ Toby Mcguire. Second UPS punch I heard today, but both were completely different. Laugh at the end might have been a little overboard, but I liked it.....Flow wasn't bad, but it seemed like you were waiting up for it a couple of times. Maybe you should have sped the beat up a bit or used a faster one. Overall, nice drop

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