Alright...


HNIC- Verse was pretty well written and had an alright structure... You had a few misusages with words... Solitary shoulda been solitude... Small stuff liek that. You wrote the topic well, and described the man/woman/things mindframe good.

Kon- Ehh...Like flow said this would be good if it were an open mic... And had a different topic. You flowed, but only touched the topic in a few lines. It wasn't too in depth with anything, but had pretty good imagery.

Vote-HNIC

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