lyricide - decent story...a bit awkward...but creative....vocab was nice but some shit didnt make sense...wordplay lacked...example of shit not making sense would be...
Heavy as a feather, my soul elevated to the white melting clouds
feathers arent heavy...lmao....umm flow sucked.....stretched lines.....but good spti....i give it a 6.2/10....

l.e. - hmm u did a creative storyline...of begging to have a life after death...and it worked....good imagery and a way better flow....vocab was good....ur shit made more sense and was more creative....give it a 7.4/10...

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