intro is drama- nice build into the instrumental.... Im really feelin the vibe of it, its a little history lesson-- your vocals are real low when you fade in in the second verse, I dunno if you might wanna change that a little... word pronounciation is o.k- but it could use a little more crispness so its easier to understand your words... but lyrically and idea wise its dope... good shit-- featured for the next week.

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