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Old 03-09-06, 06:57 PM   #11
Ltizzle
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word bumpin yo

first verse pretty nice lyrically
thing i aint like was dudes emotion, wasnt really there honestly
kinda affects his delivery too
but his flow str8

your verse was hot though
ya delivery nice i thought it fit the track nicely
ya flow coo on this, ive always liked ya flow though
lyrically its good
overall solid verse

3rd verse was basically same as 1st, i think it was same guy

hook was OK, i thought it couldve been better
it was jus kinda...boring? i think it couldve used maybe a lil more emotion or suttin, since the beat sound a bit harder

word overall its solid man keep it up
peep that new MAS joint
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