Scanz it's good to see you still writing, you have improved at lot since
I was last on.

my world unique, man i wish i was there.
as my finger tips glide across this keyboards stare.
this keyboards stare, man this keyboards there.
this keyboard is here..... wait... this keyboard is where?
so much confusion in this world of "evolution"
intoxicated by rhymes that are sold more then prostitution...

^ favorite lines, I like the way your just rhyming now still feels a little
forced at times but a massive improvement for before.