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Old 11-24-03, 03:43 PM   #13
lyrical_lady
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Yo both of these were mad nice....let's see..let's start off with filed :


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Still
to somebody out there, i must owe an ass kiss,
For
all my missbehaved actions, no doubt they dismissed,
Given
me more second chances, when all else gave up,
Taught
me some deep heard advice, like how to stand up.



^^^Those lines right there were perfected in its own way.. i liked thsi whole joint..bu those lines stood out the most... visibly deep !

Twizted ma...urs was perfectuous as well:

Quote:
They told me that my life wasnt at all just pure evil,
In this life of horror, their are some caring people,
Theres more good things just to outweigh the bad,
Great memories amongst the bad ones we've had,
They told me, look, you've got a man that loves you,
Do you want to hurt him by what you're about to do?
You love him, we see it in your eyes, the way they shine,
Everyone dies eventually, and now is NOT your time,


^^^^those lines in ways beared truth and spoke out...in a way a good verbal murder lol....


GREAT BATTLE LADIES !