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Old 01-08-05, 03:58 PM   #16
Ambient
I just don't give a fuck!
 
Posts: 2,017
From: UK
IP:

no break down needed

Ill, your structure was fucked to shit. really no need for the highlight either. explanations are wack. punches were really weak. u need to try and be more creative most of ya verse was stretched.

Nice verse prem. not great but decent punches, nice structure. basically, u took this.

v/ Prem