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Old 03-11-06, 04:49 PM   #8
.Ike.
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me and magik use this beat on our mixtape...

our version > yours lol jk..

dont really like the first dude...presence lacks...flow is ok...could be improved some..

hook isnt catchy....i dunno...i just dont like this dude..

unf comes in..

presence is better...your getting better def. .......still gotta work on pronunciation some...

other than that..it was coo...


no real stand out lines for this track...try adding some dope ass punches...

it was ok...
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