ok...hook is good...it woulda been better if u echoed the words u dragged out an had sum addlibs behind them....flow on verse is good...very clubby, nice rhythm...like the little pauses where u say alil catch phrase. Verse 2 prah...awwwwwww man u got jr writer all over ya verse...the a/b flow wit the repeat addlib is VERY jr right there...it sounded tight though, usually u use a jae millz mimish flow, but its a nice blend in 2nd half of verse u went into ya own style but boy was first 8 bars jr writer to a TEE...nice delivery, the halfway whisper jr-like delivery is oozing swag, once u figure out how to flip that into all you, its gon be a wrap fam...keep it up....good track overall yall more of a mixtape banger than like a single though but tight nonetheless def got my head bobbing.....1

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