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Old 02-02-04, 10:38 PM   #3
Ambitious
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Mc_Merc ... sorry to inform you your skill empty jerk!!
Tempt me worth ... I have you sent beneath the earth ...
Just registered .....under 15 posts tryna get ya game up
But it's easy to see other things besides your name suck!
Your flow is off .... structure could be tweaked here & there....
Who am I kiddin ... you aint even got a punch here nor there...
Simplistic rhymes ... Leave you sick like Lime ...I'm sick wit lines
Rip your mind, brain stripped in time ... only the gifted signed....
If I was to depict your grind .... it's daily dick ryding for no point ...
Cuz you wouldn't win one battle if you gave voters a joint ....
We dont like herbs ... but we do be smokin them trees ....
With the right words ... even the wrong I'm chokin you please ......
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