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Old 09-03-04, 09:22 AM   #27
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Voted For: Da Prodigy

manipulation......

good overall verse u had some weak vocab tho....ur flo and structure were ok.....didnt have any real hard punches or nice metaphores.....ur verse was pretty basic...neither verse showed ne signs of multies.....ur verse lacked creativity....everything was original kinda made me tired after readin it.......

Desipher......

your verse wasnt much better....u had better vocab and u stayed on point despite the length of you verse...you had some nice punches but some didnt really make much sence.....the stretched style wont really get you ne wear in you....it makes it sound bad when u read it and the voters dont like that...your verse was structured poorly it looks almost as if you bit it.....but besides that i think you took this battle simply based on punches and vocab....my vote Vote:desipher
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