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Old 05-27-04, 10:36 AM   #28
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Unholy thinks he thy poet everytime he thinks he feels Perplexionp...
His boyfriend fucks his mind so much hes going in no direction...

^^ ??..difficult to comprehend..reword it...sounds like a diss tho

Made a thread "Back Stage" about being Poetry Corner Mod...
u was denied but could mod Rhetorical Insights now he think he a god...

^^ good personals...but, your flow is choppy...reword it

You the Unholy Wun...deffinition is not holy the wicked one is gunna run...
Cause i sit here and listen to "Kayne West" as he singing Jesus "Walks" son...


^^ aiight...decent
You tryed being in the war but you got Ristricted as a spy in iraq...
You got caught and now a POW everyday gettin fucked in your crack...

^^ BLAH...not feelin the continual use of gay humor

This is Insane How is ~LT~ Terrosisin the Game..
Did u Pop a Membrain well feel my Words Bring Pain..
Guess Who?Well Not You cause ur Def Not a Vet..
Ur Jet-Set to SuckyVille u can beat me?Wanna bet..

^...simple, but the last line was a good punch and beat anything in his first 4 lines

Hot Line-Up maybe u can win if u put ur Heads Together..
Wether u go as 1 or Seperate ull Beat me....NEVER..
Let me rap-It-Up Like u were Another BET Comercial..
Well this Win for me Shows u bein a Vet So Contriverisal..

^^^ decent

Vote: Unholy...punches actually landed


peace