peeps go all out on using metas(similarlies)
u should use a meta cleverly ie cage - "fuck ur head up LIKE corn rows put in by blind giants"
this is good cos theres two meanings to fuck ur head up whereas
eve - "i make it hot as las vagas wether" sucks cos shes just nameing sumthing thats hot, itd be better if she said something that was funny and is clever like em - "im hotter than my dick is when i piss and it burns "

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