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Old 02-18-05, 06:02 PM   #12
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im not going to break this down....
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i basically agree with hotshh's break down....
blackmage a lil repetitive but you had multi's n incorporated
punches ya vocab needs a lil work but your on the right track..
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plague..you barely had any multi's in ya verse at all..
that was your main downfall,..your punches were ok.....
overall...v/mage
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!