impressed....your poetic side doesn't show as much as i thought it would, but a good read nonetheless one of the best pieces i've seen drop'd so far besides me lol and my C.S. Brethren, your vocabulary is on point and your imagry is pretty decent not too estatic about your emotion but it was above average so to speak, props on the drop, structure is very different the line length isn't what's different its the word usage and scheme that's impressingly awkward.

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