Damn Gyrl, TIGHT SHIT!! ITs been tooo long since you've graced RB with your talent..

This piece was steaming hottt.

"thrusting my legs apart, I begin to look in your eyes
streaming are my rivers, briefly stopping, for soft tides///...."

I liked how you never missed a beat when describing the eroticism, yet you still managed to keep it classy and beautiful, by adding the metaphors.

Vivid imagery, nice steady flow, I was really feelin it. Overall hott piece. Stay up with that shit.

Thanks for peepin my shit, gyrl, appreciate it. Hope to see more from you.
Peace