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Old 01-15-05, 09:42 AM   #12
50hater_killer
Knock out kings fur life
 
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god dam it is too long but I liked it I give it a 8/10 0n this one and these are the lines I liked but I think u could use more imagry but good job.


~Got that sticky icky coming strait outta mexico~
~My bitch was stealing from me so i had to ex-a-ho~
~You know im always chopping shit like a barber~
~Need some bud...good my shipment just came in at the harbor~
~Mad parties leave people waiting in line~
~6 blunts in the room and still you wana smoke mine~
~You wana be a true smoker then puff on this shit~
~Careful cause you might pass out on the 2nd hit~
~Crystals on this shit look like rock candy~
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