Pretty good. I think you strayed from your multi's a bit this time around but it didn't take away from your verse any. Quite a few lines that stuck out more than others, not to say the others weren't good too. Some were just better. Lol. Overall a good peice for the length.

this energy splits into synergy..composing thoughts into rhythm..
but it empties me to think outside of the box that we live in..
^Good line.

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