Leaf peddles bent down overweighted by dozens of water drops...
Appears as resemblance of past showers, but no moisture to be found on street tops...

This line stood out most in fathom this and devins verse
There concept to the topic was very original and I felt there emotion the entire way thru. They have many good concepts intertwined thru there entire peice. Emotion comes thick from both of you and vocab is alot better than your oposition.


All of a sudden Im standing at my grave, not able to be seen...
Tears are everywhere...I wake up, and it was only a dream...

this bar stood out the most in LE and gkillaz verse.
I feel they done very well working together with how they would write there verses. One ending with waking up the other starting with waking up. But there emotion lacked and therer originality with the topic is bland.
The only way they used the topic was stating a bar about dew drops.
Content in this peice isnt solid, and its not a very insightfull drop.
No hate,just yeah.

Vote Devin and Fathom this.