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Old 11-30-07, 06:30 PM   #7
Adam
 
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Val Shiest.
Umemployed sounds more of a retirement crew.
I hope this verse will instigate more of you lazy old-text-heads to drop.
Lets do this.


Now once upon, not very very long ago...
There once was a site could rapbattles so
Uhh.. what the fuck does this mean?
With a twist and a thrust, no one at gave a fuck
With a style so diverse, It split up from corrupt
That isn't why the split happened.
Then rapverse was born, and textcees did florish
from the antics of MADDRAPPER...
...to the dopeness of Zig Zag's 'Chuck Norris
The Chuck Norris shit was actually Zig's and my idea, then SPuL and JTR were in on it too, so yeah, I'm still dope.
Now we have a band of old textcee vet merry men
Fucking gay priests in a dome as they marry men
Weak.
Who knows what goes on behind those passwords?
In a crew so taboo, i regret revealing those last words
Can tell what you like to imagine goes on behind the password.
Unemployed, ye reject me, and i've taken to hold it
For I would rather have a job...
...Then have taken the eviction notice
This could have been written, "Unemployed, you rejected me, it's taken it's tool to the heart, but If I wasn't so whack maybe they'd let me try and take part.
I pop pimps then I prozac, roll cash and whole stamps ...
No Gimmicks here, Im the Real thing with the whole pack
Uhhh, no?
y'all had your shine back when this site was real nice...
It's a shame you've banded to form rapverse's surreal life..
Only half decent line and it was executed poor as fuck.
So I'll leave you with sweet thoughts to think of cold 'as' Ice
I would've added Vanila...
...But then I'm giving old styles credit to sound just as nice
Choppy and worded terrible/the creativity of that line was weak as fuck.

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3194754
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=244616


Meh, honest feedback, it was whack as fuck.

PS: You're dissing a crew you asked to be in but got rejected, hence making you lower than our level, go write a diss about yourself or something, but write it better than this.
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