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Old 05-09-07, 04:47 PM   #3
Fresh Wun
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I like the beat. Real west Coastish.
The flow was aiigh, it started to get alil' more solid in the middle of the track. Real real nice quality. The hook wasn't hittin' on to much for me, it was aiigh, but it could've been alil' more creative. Tha 2nd verse, you doin' that lil' runn off the line flow n it's gettin' ya off beat. Tha third verse was ok. Ya presence n everything was coo, I could hear ya well, but tha way ya delivered it was kinda dry. It wasn't much character behind it, feel me? Overall, it was an ok track.
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