Dizzle... Nice... could be ALOT tighter... what'd you sample..? Whatever it is... give it to me... and I'll show you what to do with it... Your cuts are better... your arrangment is 10x's what it was... you still need work on beats and pickin drums... I'd have gone a-whole-nother way with it... but good shit... 4/10... the intro was sick... the rest didn't hold up... still was nice...


Kingz... I'm going to look past the fact that this isn't a soul beat... and just say... instrument choice isn't good... alot is out of key... basically... from You still need work on beat and picking drums that I said to SDizzle... it's the same... his was just better... and it was actually a soul type beat... You did a westcoast 80's r&b/story track... 3/10


oh well... good job...


Vote Scott.