Listening...

Beat sounds deep...I like it...

Quality is all up and down and shit...Lyrics were cool...

The main things you are lacking is flow and delivery...flow was on beat, but it sounded choppy...and that also hurt your delivery. Delivery was cool in places, but your flow kinda messed it up...overall, just keep working on making your flow smoother.

But other than that, great track, keep it up.

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