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Originally Posted by L.I.
Said you know bout nuclear weapons.. all we hear is mutterin…
& if you were telling us the truth.. then why you keep stutterin?...
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Originally Posted by Abstrakt
Broke Dreams And Calous Demand Reign Over Our Chalis...
While Bush Schemes Let Ignorance Stain Covers Of Malice
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The ONLY ^^^ lines that showed any sort of insight and good flow. The rest was crap. Bad flow and obvious lyrics, overuse of vocab that you didnt know what it meant, vocab that wasnt spelled correctly. What
I suggest is this: stop
trying to make OM of the month and just make it. You're just too focused on trying to be the best and not enough focus on making your lyrics the best. Get what im sayin?.........4/10
Pz.