Originally Posted by Socrates
The ONLY ^^^ lines that showed any sort of insight and good flow. The rest was crap. Bad flow and obvious lyrics, overuse of vocab that you didnt know what it meant, vocab that wasnt spelled correctly. What I suggest is this: stop trying to make OM of the month and just make it. You're just too focused on trying to be the best and not enough focus on making your lyrics the best. Get what im sayin?.........4/10
Pz.
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