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Old 05-26-04, 09:51 PM   #20
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X - wow...that was the worst drop ive ever seen by you...all ur lines were stretched...no good punches...all were just elementary....need to elevate ur wordplay....use better meta's.....use personals.....weak verse....i give it a 3.6/10.....elevate man.....

potential - well u had better vocabulary....ur lines were stretched but not as bad as his....more complexity to ur verse....dont use "" around ur werds....better punches....u had a couple personals.....u easily took this wit that wack verse by X.....keep elevatin kid....

vote - potential

both need to elevate....
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