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VanGo had more of a predictable angle, but I enjoyed his angle alot more than Mad Mans. Mad had very basic vocab but had a few nice lines with strong messages. Your flow went off in places and was slightly confusing, just I could not get a very good imagery from this verse.
Vango, like i said, expected angle but it was done really well. I was expecting a bigger twist but it was a good story, and even sadder than I would of expected. You had more of sophisticated vocab and had lines that really painted a clear picture in my head. I really enjoyed...
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Originally Posted by VanGo
She was everything I could imagine, how'd she get caught up in all these lies
Just yesterday I was planning our wedding, today Im plotting her demise
Now I know Im not alone and some of youve been in this boat
My hands began to sweat, I felt my heart inside my throat
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Great work from both...
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