ight ima give u advice and u could take it or u could leave it
first off....dont front and dont write shit u think people wanna hear
right what YOU wanna hear and dont give a fuck bout anybody else

2nd off..if u black then ok..if u latino or mexican or whatever then ok
but if u white PLEASE do not and i say again PLEASE DO NOT
say "nigga" in any of ur rhymes or anything cuz u'll regret it
and it just makes u seem 50% more fake bout ur shit

3rd off: stay away from small words that is preschool
look at they example im bout ta show u and tell me what u like better

"i sound bad cuz i just started ta rap
right now im sad cuz i sound like crap"

or

"i leave rhymes thats intriguing thats why i flaunt it
i leave the churches preaching cuz im on that god shit"

which would u rather hear???

start droppin some of that real shit and i gurantee
that you'll get more feed from people that just aint under 50 posts

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