Niggas ask who the fuck I am like they have a case of amnesia
Inflicting anesthesia, oppenents left as victims of paraplegia
Mutin' fallen freestyle falters, printing on papers plastered
Shootin' expecting dads at altars, leaving babies as bastards

by far the best part of the piece excellent everything gave me goosebumps the talent is there......

My lines refute rappers reflecting regular pop shit in repute
Fakes smoking 'trees' giving hoods the 'leave,' forgetting about their 'roots'
My times seen too much 'current' talent join the 'mainstream' route

i hate to say this for many reasons but this gave me an eerie feeling of tupac.................

I'm the source and energy forcing enemies to watch their steps
Embodying metaphysical principles and ghetto concepts

"how to write an opening bar 101" you are the teacher and i bow to your skill

this is an excellent drop i don't think you are a "newbie" and if you are then you are pure talent good luck to you in your future endeavors......................................... ..1