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Originally Posted by 2v
Rain is a poor excuse. Your explanation was terrible.
The poem is best without an explanation, & the last two lines were boring and bland. I tried to piece it all together but it was kinda meh at the end. Sorry.
However I'm sure this qualifies as a shortly above average poem, depending on your creative writing class, afterall, people have taste for even the shortest and quickest poems. This was short, yet medium to slow.
Oh, and you had absolutely no tone.
peace.
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lmao @ the idea of you being a reasonable judge of good poetry.
for what this was, it was good. If it isn't...then all of my college professors have lied to me about everything and my degree will be a lot less valuable then you're godly ammount of knowledge of written art that you've aquired from spending so much time on a computer...and so little time in a classroom where those kinds of things are taught....i bet you could start a stem-cell lab in your basement if you could find the "how to" guide on wikipedia...couldn't you?
you already know how i feel sp....keep up...shit is good.
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