I think this link is your problem, i was lookin at your punches and i didn't go "oh he's wack, before i even knew you did audio my first thought was "he's audio". You have an audio type style and it shows in your work cause the whole time i'm thinkin this would be a pretty decent ass audio. Only 2 problems with this.

1. This isn't audio, this is text homie. There's a BIG difference. you have to be more clever, where mic pressence and delivery disappear, literal wordplay and visable metaphors come into play. The punches used against you in this battle would be hard to do audio, but text, just being able to see the words helps you.

2. Your dumbass chose to battle fuckin MIMESIS. That mistake is self explanatory.

Good bye now

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that's why most of you mothafuckas weak and out worthless
niggas you can't be deep without surface
gotta crawl before you walk but you can leap without lurches"

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