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Old 07-12-04, 04:58 AM   #12
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ok Im not gonna go into deep detail like polifik did...but...

LOT: good multis....good vocab...structure was also good...good metaphors also...no real flaws from what I can see..maybe a little more emotion in there...but over all well done...

R: pretty good structure...good emotion...flowed well...vocab was also well done...it just seemed there was more that you served up...well done...

Overall both drops were nice...but since I have to choose which one was better Im gonna have to go with Restricted....like I said he just had more emotion and a slightly better structure...

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