EL Eye-Nice Drop and it was Nice..It gave more like if I was
there and had a nice rhyme Scheme to it which led it to be nice..
I felt scared like it was real and I liked how it was..But mainly
not that much vocab but structure was basic

Spul-You didnt come to well, You was suppose to
tell about a bombinb on a plane but you didnt express how it
was...I liked the beginning where it was but it didnt lead
to how a plane was being bombed and you was there,

v/El Eye, Mah bad Spul But both did good

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