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Old 09-17-06, 04:35 PM   #24
~Luciano~
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From: $.W Detroit
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Wordz u came good here
like everyone said ya quality got better
chorus got kinda lame..but shit i need
2 work on makein choruses also
could of stepped ya lyrical game up
i mean its a topical dude..but u dropped nice

Past
awsome quality as always i like where you went
with this..still comin kinda basic but at the end
of this season ya lyrical game will probly step up
but ima make this short and simple.for the overall
better track ima go with

v/Past
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