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Old 06-26-04, 12:45 PM   #6
Poppa Kap
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First off props to both for ur verses and dropping as early as you. Meta that text font and colour u write in makes it diffucult to read by the way i got a freakin headache.

I think MEta got this because he had better rhyme scheme, great imagery and his lines were pretty descriptive and altho the story did not go so where amazing, it was very well described, i was expecting a twist of some sort like one of the friends grassed them up. But good verse Meta.

As for CMFS, nice try but I really didnt think you put much effort into this, maybe you werent feeling the topic but ur vocab was very simple and it wasnt really a great take on the topic. Nice try but Unfortunately for you, Meta took this quite well.

Vote Meta.

o and LMAO at this..

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Originally Posted by MetaSkriptz
2 Weeks layer bonaculars setting on the bottom of my eye sockets
We scoped out his crip as set as pockets, Set his cash in Safe Lockets


used the same words and same layout in a rhyme scheme im writing for my topic, better change it before peeps think im biting.