HNIC:

really impressed with your verse. great imagery and emotion. The depth was good. you didnt dtop at the surface of the topic you went beneath it and described how everything was, never missing a detail. The flow was decent structure was good. And most of all you stuck to the topic the whole way through. good story line also

overall: 8.5/10

Konfliktz:

Your verse was hott.......... for an open mic. Im sorry man but you only hit the actual topic a couple of time. and the whole first part of your verse had nothing to do with the topic. I understand that you were telling a story and leading up to why you became insane. But you wasted way too many lines on it. Get into the topic quickly or people are gonna judge like how im judging. Your emotion was decent structure was decent, good flow wordplay and multies. Imagery was dope. But you didnt hold on to the topic you kinda sifted away from it all together and for that reason alone you lost.

overall : 7/10

vote: HNIC

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