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Old 12-21-04, 06:24 PM   #6
JPoll
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Breakdown for this shizzle


Omega first up to bat
Now I'd make a name play but Spul doesn't make an onze of sense/
Still, Omega's gonna make you eat your words like Alpha-Bets/
7 i've heard this a million and two times, still funny opening line...terrible punch
Let me just be the first to say your luck switched/
Don't know about Banks but his impersonators suck dick/
8 haha, thats pretty good, everything so far is worded well also
I'll throw off your whole day like you stopped eatting breakfast/
You should of just quit, I thought you stopped being Reckless/
8.5 oh shit...haha...thats funny
First round no shows, then you got Omega battlin/
By the time it's over you'll be dead as Sega Saturn/
8.5 haha, that's funny shit...so true
You wanna conquer Empires, so eagerly now/
But skipping straight to the Gods is not strategically sound/
6.5 blah blah blah, lucky i gave you this, absolutely not even an attempt for anythign
So, cheers! Here's looking at your carrer/
In Spul's next round he'll be battling tears/
7 blah i think i've read almost the same line, played...


now for Spul

Sit back Omega, and watch me make yo final two spot gone
The only chance you got of beating me is if I jacked off wit watch on
7 blah blah blah, la la la looking for some originality
I'll make you take my order, and push you around jus like a waiter
Only time you would be "Real" is on yo computer music player
8 haha thats pretty decent although it would be his music player thats real not him...but good try
2 years of hooked on phonics an your still not a learner
but cross dressin wedges is the only way your a earn-her
7.5 not great, your better then this
image hard?your ass been ripped more than ya vest bares
punchlines?more a less fillers..in your verse,thicker than your moms chest hairs
6.5 blah blah cough cough...
when i say wack?he says look at my verse spuls mockin-me..
like his girls head his verse hold more up an downs then velocity
9 that is a punch, seriously though not that hard, its about his girl come on
Your verses are all wack, so 8 lines, I'ma wrap it up like Hindu
After seein' yo last verse, I'm wondering about yo skill, "Is it in you?"
6. not even a punch...at all really you are so much better then this verse...


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