^lol kid aint got no sig..and i think that cats Taz..who got banned for cheating but anyways

Nice peice homie..i was really feeling it ..you had nice emotions..very unique topic..wicsh i could have collabed on you on this but you did a very nice job..i loved the imagery you created in this peice..only thing that kinds didnt catch my eye was your structure...and how long your bars were..try and shorten up your bars to get the thought across to the readers quicker then having the reader read awhole long story..na'mean..but Overall i loved this peice..keep it up..return the favor in the sig hell vs heaven

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