I like how the beat comes in. First thing I notice is how fucking whack your voice sounds on this, this is NOT fight music. Maybe for a kindergaretener or something, but not grown people. You sound wannabe mainstream as shit. WTF, well that feedback was for the first person, if there are two people.
the second "person has a little bit better voice but still has the same prollems. The flow was iight though, if that makes your life better. Stop talking that gangsta shit though, nobody believes you. pz