Short and to the point man .. dope .. I liked the way you took the idea a lot .. the shortness didn't take away from the piece in this one man .. this had a lot of true felr lines in here ..


Dream of you as my security blanket
Cover my fears, shielding me quick


But that line there was the one that had me .. I thought it was dope man .. very real and recognizable .. nice piece here again man .. keep writin .. one