1st persons flow is horrible. u need alot of work on dat. but lyrics r str8. u sound like mr. cheeks. hook is wack. 2nd person is trash. U need to improve on ur flow just like the first dude. i wasn't feelin ur lyrics at all. 3rd dude is da same shit. u all need to work on ya flow. on ya tracks and ur rhymes alot more. if this shit came on the radio i would change the station. u need to find a way to keep the listeners wantin more. work on that.
overall.. i would give it a 4.5/10

dont take it as negative critisism. take it as motivation to tremendously elevate.

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