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Old 10-29-05, 04:28 PM   #2
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the intro is cool. Doomsday sounds so mean. lol

oh snap. i hate these kinda beats. but thats still cool.

first verse - i think your flow is too strict. like i think you should kinda relax more with the flow and let it flow. you are on the beat though. lyrics nah. but that dont matter cause people usually just listen to the beat.

chorus - boring. nothing special

second verse -flow same as first. alicia keys line? umm its okay. lyrics again werent too good. your prescence was there. matched the beat well.


overall good club song.


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