Originally Posted by MurDaH187

Ha you fucking topic beast how dare you drop something so good as this haha...
Danm kid I felt like the begining was pretty weak and was gonna be one of those regular average drop but danm was I fool'd serious this was a perfect movie playing in my head as I read it line for line good description from start to finish love the twist in the story felt like this wasn't complex now well above average either but why do you need those thing when u don't need them because u just prove u don't need hella vocab to grasp the reader attention and feel like this is a hella read I. Mean this probley one or the best deep topic open mic read I've read so far congrats u def a beast with topicals...

10/10 loved the whole thing....

And the topic wasn't creative nor complex yet u came hard like it was...

My only question is how long did it take u to write this honestly???