pretty good topical battle...apotheosis i was really feeling your verse i thought i wouldnt like your structure at first but then i began to enjoy it and i thought it made your verse a lil bit better...i think you flowed pretty consistent and stayed on the topic consistent also...good topical piece from you

overall : 8/10

poetic justice you also had a very good piece but i wasnt feeling it as much as apotheosis's verse...you had some raw emotion in your verse but not as much as you usually do i think this was your worst topical i have seen from you...you didnt really grasp the concept or the topic

overall : 5/10

vote: apotheosis

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